V?? l???i ngu ?????n Nguy???n B??nh Ph????ng... (ti??p)

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V?? L???i ngu ?????n Nguy???n B??nh Ph????ng (ti???p theo)
H??NH ???NH CU???I C??NG ??? B??i V?? l???i phi th?? ca c???a NGUY???N B??NH PH????NG (*)
Nguy??n b???n:

H??NH ???NH CU???I C??NG

Nh???ng c?? g??i ?????n v???i anh
R???i l???ng l??? ra ??i
H??? mang theo ch??t bu???n l??m k??? ni???m
Ch??? c??n l???i b??ng nh???ng h??ng c??y
Anh bi???t m??nh d???n d???n kh?? c???n
V?? l???i ngu ?????n Nguy???n B??nh Ph????ng... (ti??p)
V?? L???i ngu ?????n Nguy???n B??nh Ph????ng (ti???p theo)
H??NH ???NH CU???I C??NG ??? B??i V?? l???i phi th?? ca c???a NGUY???N B??NH PH????NG  (*)
Nguy??n b???n:

H??NH ???NH CU???I C??NG

Nh???ng c?? g??i ?????n v???i anh
R???i l???ng l??? ra ??i
H??? mang theo ch??t bu???n l??m k??? ni???m
Ch??? c??n l???i b??ng nh???ng h??ng c??y
Anh bi???t m??nh d???n d???n kh?? c???n

?????ng bu???n em ??i, ng?????i y??u cu???i c??ng
Sau kho???ng trr???ng l?? c??nh ?????ng c???a kh??i
??? n??i ???y ti???ng chim
V?? c??ng t???n s??? tr???m ng??m ki???p ????
V???n ?????i ch??? hai ta

Em s??? c???m b??n tay anh kh?? h??o
B??ng qua ao h???, b??ng qua d???i b??n ??en
Ch???m r???i h??ng c??y v??? xanh l???i
Xanh li??n mi??n???
(*) B??i in tr??n b??o Ng?????i H?? N???i n??m th??? 30, xu??n ???t M??i, s??? : 5+6+ 7+8+9 - 2015


????? Ho??ng

    C??ngg nh?? Ph?? Tram-Inrasara - ti???ng Vi???t r???t k??m, d??n t???c Ch??m lu??n nh???  ?????ng  v?? Chinh ph??? c???u ????i, h???c sinh ??i h???c ???????c ??u ti??n c???p s??ch v???,  th??? m?? l??c n??o Inrasara c??ng to ti???ng ta l?? ng?????i c??ch t??n th?? Vi???t (!);  Nguy???n B??nh Ph????ng l?? ng?????i Kinh nh??ng ti???ng Vi??t c??ng kh??ng h??n Ph?? Tr???m Inrasara bao nhi??u m?? trong c??ch vi???t, c??ch l???p ng??n c??ng ??i???u ????ng t??? ra ta ????y l?? ng???n c??? c??ch t??n th?? Vi???t(!)
   Kh??t v???ng c??ch t??n th?? Vi???t l?? ??i???u ????ng tr??n tr???ng, nh??ng c??ch t??n nh?? th??? n??o, ????ng g??p c?? nh??n, ????ng g??p phong tr??o, v???n h???i, th???i c?????.ra sao? Kh??ng th??? t??? n???m t??c m??nh nh???y qua v??ng n?????c(!) ??i???u n??y nhi???u chuy??n lu???n, ti???u lu???n t??i ???? vi???t v?? c??ng nhi???u ng?????i vi???t.
    Ri??ng Nguy???n B??nh Ph????ng t??i ???? vi???t v??? t???p v?? l???i phi th?? ca ??? Bu???i c??u h??? h???ng???, v??  d???ch ra th?? Vi???t m???t v??i b??i l???. ????ng ra kh??ng n??n m???t th?? gi??? c??ng s???c cho m???t vi???c v?? b??? n??y, nh??ng v?? t??i th???y qu?? nhi???u ng?????i l??ng x?? Nguy???n B??nh Ph????ng, coi Nguy???n Binh Ph????ng l?? ng?????i c??ch t??n th?? Vi???t(!) n??n t??i ph???i v??o cu???c, ph???i ??i b??nh m???t b??i v?? l???i v??? v???n ???H??nh ???nh cu???i c??ng??? c???a Nguy???n B??nh Ph????ng  .
  ????y l?? m???t b??i vi???t d??? d???ng th?? kh??ng ra th??, v??n kh??ng ra v??n, ph?? kh??ng ra ph??, v?? kh??ng ra v?????n?? l?? t??? s???, c???a m???t c??n b??? c?? ch???c quy???n, c???a m???t quan tham th???i nh??ng nhi???u  N?? l?? lo???i ???v?? l???i??? ??ang th???nh h??nh!
  Th??? m?? Nguy???n B??nh Ph????ng ???????c nhi???u h???c gi??? h???c th???t, ti???n s??? b?? l??ng x?? l??n m??y xanh, l???i ???????c sinh vi??n ch???n l??m lu???n v??n Th???c s???(!)
 Quay l???i v???i b??i ???H??nh ???nh cu???i c??ng???. B??i n??y n?? m???i ??? ch??? n??o, n?? hay ??? ch??? n??o, c?? h??nh ???nh, ?? t??? n??o m???i, t??? d??ng n??o m???i h???p v??n c???nh. S??? c??ch t??n th??? hi???n ??? ????u?
M???y c??u m??? ?????u:
???Nh???ng c?? g??i ?????n v???i anh
R???i l???ng l??? ra ??i
H??? mang theo ch??t bu???n l??m k??? ni???m
Ch??? c??n l???i b??ng nh???ng h??ng c??y
Anh bi???t m??nh d???n d???n kh?? c???n???.???
 N???u vi???t ra c??u v??n xu??i n?? s??? th??? n??y: ???Nh???ng c?? g??i ?????n v???i anh, r???i l???ng l??? ra ??i. H??? mang theo ch??t bu???n l??m k??? n???m. Ch??? c?? l???i b??ng nh???ng h??ng c??y. Anh bi???t m??nh d???n d???n kh?? c???n.???
   M???t c??u k??? c??? th??? d??? h??n c??? c??u v??n xu??i, nh?? m???t c??u n??i vo c???a m???t tay c??n b??? t??? ch???c hay m???t tay c?? quy???n l???c.nh???n ng?????i v?? sa th???i ng?????i. C??u n??i n??y sao l???i n??i v???i ng?????i y??u cu???i c??ng ???????c? C?? ch??ng trai n??o n??i v???i ng?????i y??u r???ng m??nh ???? c?? r???t nhi???u ????n b?? ??i qua mang bu???n l??m k??? ni???m? Kh??ng c?? tay c??n b??? t??? ch???c hay c?? ch???c quy???n n??o ??i k??? m??nh ???? c?? nhi???u c?? g??i ?????n v?? mang n???i bu???n ra ??i! Ngay c??? v??? ch???ng, kh??ng c?? ??ng ch???ng n??o l???i ??i t??m s??? nh?? th??? v???i v???!
   T??c gi??? n??i v???y ????u c?? chinh x??c. Anh r???t v?? ??o??n. Anh c?? ch???c ch???n ai c??ng mang bu???n l??m k??? ni???m? Sao anh bi???t ???????c? Ch???ng c??? ??? ????u? Anh r???t ch??? quan, anh kh??ng h??? h???c t??m l??. N???u h??? vui, h??? ???????c gi???i tho??t  th?? sao? B???i ???m???c ph???i anh nh?? m???c nh??nh m??? tr??, g??? cho  r???i ??c tr??? ch???ng c??n???
Hay:
???N??ng n???c ?????t ??u??i t??? ????y nh??
Ngh??n v??ng kh??n chu???c d???u b??i v??i???
(H??? Xu??n H????ng)
 C??u ti??p: ??? Ch??? c??n l???i b??ng nh???ng h??ng c??y???. Anh ????a hinh ???nh b??ng nh???ng h??ng c??y ????? n??i ?? g???  Hay trong s??? h??? ????  c??ng anh ??i d?????i b??ng h??ng c??y ????? li??n h??? c??ng vi??c, v?? l??m t??nh n???u c?? th??? x???y ra,  ????? b??y gi??? anh nh??? lai m???t c??ch r???i r???c, l???nh c???m nh?? v???y?
C??u ti???p: ??? Anh bi???t m??nh d???n d???n kh?? c???n???. M???t c??u r???t ????y gi???i ph???u h???c. M???t c??u kh??ng mang m???t ?? v??? g?? th?? ca. M???t c??u n??i c???a m???t quan tham th???i nay. Tay c?? ch???c quy???n c?? th??? l??m h???i nhi???u c?? g??i nh??ng tr??? l???i th?? th??n th??? anh ta c??ng nh?? T??y M??n Kh??nh, c??ng b??? b??n r??t h???t x????ng th???t ????? ?????n n???i kh?? c???n:
???Th????ng thay y???u ??i???u ph???n li???u b??? 
Tay kh??ng c??ng gi???t ???????c ngu phu
Kh??ng c???n dao b??a, c???n g????m gi??o
Khi???n v???n anh h???ng tu??? c???t kh?????
(Kim B??nh Mai)
 Ch??? c?? T??y M??n Kh??nh v?? ????m quan tham b??y gi??? than nh?? v???y!

V?? em ??t c???a ????m ???y n??n c??ng than nh?? v???y:
C??c b??c thi nh??n ti???n nh??n ???? n??i r???t nhi???u v?? r???t th?? v??? s??? chia ly mong ch???, ti???c nu???i th???t vong m?? l?? th??:
???Non cao nh???ng ng??ng c??ng mong
Su???i kh?? d??ng l??? ch??? mong th??ng ng??y???
(T??n ????)
V???i ng?????i th?????ng chia ly ???? ??au ?????n m???t, th?? thi nh??n ??au ?????n m?????i:
???Ng?????i ??i m???t n???a h???n t??i m???t
M???t n???a h???n t??i b???ng d???i kh??????
(H??n M???c T??? ) 

 Vi???t v??? tr???ng hu???ng nay thi nh??n c??? kim ?????u c?? bao tuy???t t??c. :
C??c nh?? th?? ??????ng ?????i ???? vi??t:
???Khi ng?????i kh??ng y??u ta
Bu???n ????u ???? m???t nh???.
Khi ta kh??ng y??u ng?????i
Sao c??ng b???n ?????n th???!
(Anh Ng???c)
Hay s??? chia xa m?? ?????p:

K?? VI???N
M??? nh??n t???i th???i hoa m??n ???????ng
M??? nh??n kh??? h???u d?? kh??ng s??ng
S??ng trung t?? b??? quy???n b???t t???m
Ch?? kim tam t???i v??n d?? h????ng
H????ng di???c c??nh b???t di???t
Nh??n di???c c??nh b???t lai
T????ng t?? ho??ng di???p l???c
B???ch l??? th???p thanh ????i
(L?? B???ch)
 G???I PH????NG XA

Khi c??n ng?????i ?????p nh?? ?????y hoa
Ng?????i ?????p ??i r???i c??n g???i ra
G???i ra, gi?????ng ?????m kh??ng ai cu???n
Ba n??m nay h????ng v???n th??m ?????m ????
H????ng th??m th??m m??i m??i
Ng?????i xa v???n v???i v???i
Nh??? nhung l?? v??ng r???ng  
R??u xanh tr???ng s????ng r??i!
(????? Ho??ng d???ch)


Hay chia xa k??? ni???m l??n h????ng:

LES ROSES DE SAADI

???
Les noeuds ont ??clat??. Les roses envol??es
Dans le vent, ?? la mer s'en sont toutes all??es;
Elles ont suivi l'eau pour ne plus revenir;
*
La vague en a paru rouge et comme enflamm??e.
Ce soir, ma robe encore en est tout embaum??e...
Respires-en sur moi l'odorant souvenir.

HOA H???NG C???A SAADI

N??t d??y ???? ?????t. T???ng b??ng hoa l??a
Bay theo gi?? cu???n ra bi???n xa kia
Hoa tr??i theo n?????c kh??n mong tr??? v???.
*
L??n s??ng ????? r???c nhu???m s???c hoa sinh
Chi???u v??? ??o em c??n th??m h????ng l??nh
L??n h????ng k??? ni???m, h??t v??o ??i anh!
(Ho???? Anh d???ch)

(Marceline Desbordes ??? Valmore (1786-1859)


Kh??? th??? nh???t c???a b??i H??nh ???nh cu???i c??ng l?? s??? l???p lu???n kh??ng ch??nh x??c, v?? ??o??n, kh??ng hi???u t??m l??, th??? hi???n m???t c??ch kh???nh kh???ng t??? b???ch s??? ki???t qu??? th??n x??c c???a m??nh kh??ng ph???i l???i. N?? kh??ng c?? m???t ch??t g?? thi s???.
Kh??? th??? hai: ????????ng bu???n em ??i, ng?????i y??u cu???i c??ng???. ?????n ????y ng?????i ?????c m???i bi???t ch??nh x??c t??c g?????? n??i v???i ng?????i y??u cu???i c??ng c???a m??nh. Ng?????i y??u cu???i c??ng ch???c c??ng t?????ng t?????ng ra v?? l??m sao bi???t ai l?? ng?????i y??u cu???i c??ng, ngay c??? ng?????i s???ng tr??n 100 tu???i!
 ????ng ra ng?????i y??u cu???i c??ng ph???i n??i l???i n??y ch???. H??? tha th??? cho anh nh???ng th??ng ng??y hoang d???i  ????????ng bu???n anh ??i ???? c?? em ????y???. Sao m??nh ???? v?? b??o v???t t??p nhi???u nh?? th???, ???? ch??n bi???t m???y c??nh ph?? dung m?? m??nh c?? quy???n g?? l???i khuy??n ng?????i y??u ??oan ch??nh ?????ng bu???n. Sao anh c?? quy???n khuy??n  ng?????i ta nh?? v???y, khi anh l?? k??? nh??ng ch??m.
 V?? t??? kh??? th??? hai v??? k???t l?? m???t ki???u n??i ??ng ch???ng b?? chu???c, kh??ng ?????u kh??ng cu???i v???i nhi???u m???nh ?????, ?????nh ngh??a kh??ng ch??nh x??c, l??ng th??ng v???i m???t ki???n th???c n??ng c???n l??m d??ng, l??m duy??n, u???n ??o, k???ch c???m.
???Sau kho???ng tr???ng l?? c??nh ?????ng c???a kh??i???
Sau kho???ng tr???ng n??o? ??? Kho???ng tr???ng r???ng c??y hay kho???ng tr???ng ?? c???a, hay kho???ng tr???ng tr???i xanh. Th?? th?? c?? th??? kh??ng c??? th??? nh??ng ????a ra m???nh ????? ph???i ch??nh x??c, kh??ng th??? t?? m?? v?? kh??ng ch??nh x??c  nh?? v???y ???????c. Trong to??n h???c ????y l?? ph???m tr?? bao h??m ngo??i, c??n h??ng v???n c??i bao h??m trong  n???a, k??? sao xi???t.
?????c gi??? ???? kh??ng bi???t kho???ng tr???ng n??o, l???i c??ng kh??ng bi???t v?? sao sau kho???ng tr???ng l???i c?? c??nh ?????ng c???a kh??i? Kh??i n??o ????y? Sao l???i vi???t v?? b??? nh?? th??? n??y nh????
Th??? sau kho???ng tr???ng c?? nhi???u th??? kh??c th?? sao?
Nh??:
 
  • Sau kho???ng tr???ng l?? tr??ng tr??ng c???t ??i???n cao th??? 500klovol
  • Sau kho???ng tr???ng l?? c??c trung ??o??n xe t??ng Li??n X?? x??ng l??n di???t b???y qu??n ?????c
  • Sau kho???ng tr???ng l?? c??c c?? g??i Th??i ??? tru???ng t???m su???i???
V?? ti???p ?????n : ???s??? tr???m ng??m c???a ??????? . T??? d??ng ??? ????u ????a s??? tr???m ng??m c???a ???? v??o ????y. V??o ????y ????? n??i ?? g??? M???t lo???t m???nh ????? c??u c?? r???t l?? vi???t ??? nh?? th????ng Tr??u Qu??? (!) 
 Nh?? th?? ph???i bi???t l??m m???i ch???, Nguy???n B??nh Ph????ng ???? kh??ng bi???t l??m m???i ch??? m?? l???i c??n l???m d???ng ch??? c?? l??m cho n?? c??ng t???i m?? h??n.
C??u k???t:
???ch???m r???i h??ng c??y v??? l??m xanh l???i
xanh li??n mi??n??????
 Li??n mi??n l?? hai ch??? H??n ph??t ??m theo ??m H??n ??? Vi???t v?? ch??a Vi???t h??a ???????c nh???u.
  Ng?????i Vi???t b??nh th?????ng kh??ng bi???t xanh li??n mi??n l?? xanh g???
Ti???ng Vi???t c?? h??ng v???n t??nh t???  ph???m ch???t  ch??? xanh:
 
  • Xanh ngu??t, xanh r??, xanh lam, xanh ng???c b??ch, xanh ng???t, xanh Qu??ng Tr??????
  • ???Tr???i thu xanh ng???t, ?? k??a
Hai con h???c tr???ng bay v??? B???ng Lai???
(Th??? L???)
???Da tr???i ai nhu???m m?? xanh ng???t
M???t l??o kh??ng v???y c??ng ????? hoe??????
(Nguy???n Khuy???n)
???Tr???i v???n xanh m???t m??u xanh Qu???ng Tr???
T???n ch??n tr???i m??y n??i c?? chia ????u???
Ch??? Lan Vi??n)
D??ng xanh li??n mi??n kh??c g?? ????nh ????? ng?????i ?????c. Trong H??n t??? ch??? li??n c?? 7 ch???, ch??? mi??n c?? 5 ch???; m???i ch??? c?? t??? 3 ????n 5, 6 ngh??a. V???y hai ch??? n??y k???t h???p v???i nhau ???? g???n 100 ngh??a. Ngh??a ????ng c???a n?? l?? xanh xa v???i.
Th??? sao t??c gi??? kh??ng vi???t:
???V??? xanh l???i h??ng c??y
Xanh xa v???i v???i!
C?? ph???i hay v?? d??? hi???u h??n kh??ng.
C??n vi???t xanh li??n mi??n, ?????n ng?????i ?????c th??ng th???o c??ng kh??ng lu???n ra ????ng xanh li??n mi??n l?? xanh g??, hu???ng g?? ng?????i ?????c b??nh th?????ng.
 Nguy???n B??nh Ph????ng c??ng nh?? nhi???u t??c gi??? kh??c kh??ng bi???t ch??? H??n nh??ng l???i s??nh d??ng ch??? H??n ????? ????nh ????? b???n ?????c m?? ch??nh m??nh kh??ng hi???u, m???t vi???c l??m v?? c??ng tai h???i, kh??ng n??i l?? ngu d???t!

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    Nguy???n B??nh Ph????ng vi???t kh??ng c?? g?? m???i v??? n???i dung v?? ngh??? thu???t, m???t th??? V?? l???i ch??nh h??ng. M???t ?????i vi???t kh??ng c?? m???t b??i th?? n??o cho ?????i, m???t ?????i qu??n ng?? kh??ng c?? b??i th?? n??o cho b??? ?????i, ???? l?? ??i???u r???t ????ng tr??ch. Nh??ng ????ng tr??ch v?? ????ng lo h??n khi nh???ng b??i v?? l???i c???a Nguy???n B??nh Ph????ng v?? nhi???u ng?????i kh??c ???????c ????a v??o s??ch gi??o khoa, (???? ????a m???t v??i t??c gi??? r???i), r???i nhi???u ng?????i s??? l??m lu???n ??n ti???n s??? v??? ???ngh??? thu???t th?? Nguy???n B??nh Ph????ng??? th?? v??n ch????ng ?????t n?????c n??y kh??ng n??i c??ng bi???t r???i!
  

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