CH??M TRUY???N NG???N C???A L?? V??N TH???O ??? S?? S??I, NH???T, D???

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      L?? V??n Th???o v???a r???i c?? ch??m truy???n ng???n (3 truy???n) in tr??n T???p ch?? Nh?? v???n & T??c ph???m s??? 4 (th??ng 3 +4/2014) g???m: ?????a con b??? b???t c??c, Tr??ng s???, Kh???p n???o ???????ng r???ng.v???i m???t sa p?? gi???i thi???u r???t k??u: ??? T???ng th??? qua l???i v??n c??? tr??m ch??? kh??ng c???n ch???m c??u, trong c??u ngo???i h???ng c??n c??? ?????i tho???i l???n l???i d???n chuy???n, v???y nh??ng nh??? c??c kh???u ?????u ng??? Nam B??? m?? ??ng r???t n???m v???ng, v??n L?? V??n Th???o v???n ??nh l??n nhi???u s???c th??i c???m x??c m???t c??ch m???ch l???c. T??i. Th??? m?? b??y gi??? l???i ch???u kh?? ch???m c??u??????
      ?????c m???y d??ng gi???i thi???u n??y, t??i l???i nh??? c??ch ????y h??n n???a th??? k??? khi v??o b???p n??c v??n ch????ng c?? ?????c ??o???n S?? kh???p vi???t th?? cho c???ng t??c vi??n. Vi???c nh?? th??? n??y:  C?? m???t t??c gi??? g???i b???n th???o ?????n cho S?? kh???p v?? vi???t: ???Xin ??ng b??? qua d???u ch???m ph???y, v?? t??i kh??ng ch?? ?? ?????n n??.???
 S?? kh???p li???n vi???t tr??? l???i: ??? L???n sau n???u g???i b??i cho t??i, anh ch??? c???n g???i d???u ch???m ph???y l?? ????????.
     D???u ch???m, d???u ph???y, d???u ch???m than, d???u hai ch???m l?? s??ng t???o c???a lo??i ng?????i trong ng??n ng???. Tr???i qua ngh??n n??m m???i c?? ???????c. Trong kh???u ng??? n??i ph???i c?? ch??? d???ng h??i ng???n, d???ng h??i d??i; trong vi???t v??n c?? ng???t ?? khi ch??a tr???n c??u, c?? ch???m than ????? th??? hi???n v??n c???nh, kh??ng kh????? M???t nh?? v??n m?? b??? h???t t???t c??? d???u ch???m ph???y th?? ???? l?? ng?????i kh??ng bi???t vi???t v??n, kh??ng hi???u ng??n ng??? n??i v?? ng??n ng??? vi???t c???a d??n t???c m??nh v?? c???a nh??n lo???i.
  Trong 3 truy???n ng???n c???a L?? V??n Th???o th?? ch??? c?? truy???n Tr??ng s??? l?? ???????c h??n c???. Truy???n c?? m???t ch??t n???i t??m nh??n v???t, c?? m???t ??t ng???m ng??i ???????c m???t trong cu???c ?????i. Nh??ng n?? nh???t v?? qu?? c??. Ng?????i ta ???? vi???t nhi???u v??? vi???c tr??ng s??? v?? ?????c m?? tr??ng s??? r???i. Hai truy???n c??n l???i th?? r???t s?? s??i, ????n gi???n v?? c??ng qu?? c?? k???. N?? nh?? c??c ph??ng s??? in nhan nh???n tr??n c??c m???t b??o h??m nay. Nhi???u ph??ng s??? c??n x??t th????ng, ??au ?????n nhi???u h??n hai truy???n ng???n n??y.
  Truy???n ng???n ?????a con b??? b???t c??c k??? v??? m???t c?? gi??o Lan c?? ch???ng l?? Ph????ng l??m ??? ?????a ch???t ??ang ????a con ??i kh??m b???nh vi??n. V??o vi???n ????? con tr??n gi?????ng b???nh r???i v??o ph??ng v??? sinh th?? b??? m???t ph??? n??? ??m ??i kh??ng bi???t ????u m?? t??m. Sau ???? l??m ????n v?? c??ng ch???ng c???u c???u c??ng. Sau t??m th??ng th?? t??m ???????c con v???. Ng?????i b???t c??c tr??? con l?? m???t ????n b?? v?? sinh, mu???n c?? con n??n b???t v??? nu??i. V?? ph???m t???i nh?? th??? n??n c?? ta ph???i ??i t??.
  Truy???n ch???ng c?? g?? m???i, l???i vi???t tr??c tr??c tr??c tr???ng, l???n ng???n, c??u ch??? kh??ng m???t ??m vang, thao thi???t n??n r???t kh?? ?????c, kh?? c???m; m???c d?? nh??n v???t c?? gi??o Lan nhi???u l???n t??c gi??? cho kh??c r???ng l??n!
  V??n c???a L?? V??n Th???o v?? c??ng s?? s??i, r???t non n???t, kh??ng m???t ch??t h??m s??c, g???i c???m, v??n nh?? ng?????i Nam b??? m???i t???p vi???t truy???n ng???n!
 T??i ph???i ?????c truy???n n??y v??i l???n ????? xem b???i c???nh truy???n x???y ra ??? ????u. L??c ?????u t?????ng l?? L?? V??n Th???o l???y b???i c???nh t??? th???i H??? Bi???u Ch??nh vi???t C?????i g?????ng, khi th?? t?????ng th???i S??n Nam vi???t M??a len tr??u, sau ng??? l?? qu???ng Do??n Qu???c S??? vi???t H????ng l???a ba sinh. Cu???i c??ng m???i bi???t l?? vi???t th???i sau gi???i ph??ng mi???n Nam 1975!
 Xin tr??ch:
 ???Ph????ng v??? nh??. Vi??n thi???u t?? ???? c?? m???t, ??ang ng???i ?????i di???n v???i Lan.Tr??n b??n c?? t???m danh thi???p. Lan ng???i d???ch v??o cho Ph????ng ng???i c???nh b??n, c???m ????a t???m danh thi???p. Ph????ng c???m nh??ng kh??ng ?????c (trang 6 c???t 1, d??ng 17 d?????i l??n - T???p ch?? Nh?? v??n & T??c ph???m s??? 4 th??ng 3+4/n??m 2014)
 Hay:
???Lan nh???n ???????c ??i???n c???a vi??n thi???u t??, b??o l?? ???? t??m ???????c ?????a con , k??u Lan ??i???n b??o cho ch???ng. ????ng ra vi??n thi???u t?? b??n chuy???n v???i Ph????ng, nh??ng c?? l??? anh ngh?? tin t???t l??nh n??n b??o v???i ng?????i m?????? (trang 7 c???t 2, d??ng 13 tr??n xu???ng, s??ch ???? d???n)
 ?????c  hai ??o???n n??y th?? sao kh??ng tin b???i c???nh truy???n l???y t??? th???i Vi???t Nam C???ng h??a.
  Th???i Vi???t Nam C???ng h??a, c??c nh?? b??o, nh?? v??n tr??n s??ch b??o hay d??ng ?????i t??? vi??n ????? ch??? c??c ch???c s???c trong qu??n ?????i, c???nh s??t S??i g??n. ??? mi???n B???c khi ?????c ?????n vi??n thi???u ??y, thi???u t?? l?? bi???t ????m ng???y r???i.  C??c chi???n s??? c??ng an ho???c qu??n ?????i ta kh??ng nh?? v??n, nh?? b??o n??o n??i v?? vi???t vi??n trung ??y, vi???n th?????ng ??y, vi??n ?????i t?????ng c???.
Ch???c l?? nh?? v??n L?? V??n Th???o ?????i m???i c??ch g???i c??ng san ????? l???y l??ng anh em b??n kia chi???n tuy???n ??? l???i x??y d???ng ?????t n?????c v???i m??nh(!)
 Xin m??? ngo???c th??m: c??ng an hay c???nh s??t ?????u l?? t??? H??n. Ngo??i B???c g???i nh?? Trung Qu???c l?? c??ng an: B??? C??ng an, c??n an t???nh, c??ng an huy??n, c??ng an x??, c??ng an x??m??? B??y gi??? c??n g???i th??m nhi???u b??? ph???n l?? C???nh s??t nh??: H???c vi???n C???nh s??t nh??n. C???nh s??t c?? ?????ng, C???nh s??t bi???n. C??n trong Nam th???i tr?????c ch??? g???i l?? C???nh s??t nh?? T???ng Nha c???nh s??t
 T??i ngh?? L?? V??n Th???o vi???t vi??n thi???u t??  ho???c vi??n ?????i t?????ng c??ng kh??ng sao, nh??ng ????? ng?????i ?????c hi???u l???m l?? kh??ng n??n.
  Truy???n ng???n Kh???p ng??? ???????ng r???ng g???i n?? l?? phi???m v??n hay ??o???n v??n th?? ????ng h??n. Truy???n qu?? ????n gi???n, qu?? s?? s??i, n?? thua c??? m???t ph??ng s??? b??o vi???t. Truy???n k??? c?? m???t k??? ch??? l??m c??ng vi???c l???t v???t b???p n??c ??? m???t tr???m ????n ????a - tr???m giao li??n chuy??n h??ng h???t chuy???nn ng?????i kh??c v?? nh???n th??nh t??ch trong c??c tr???n chi???n ?????u ???? l?? c???a m??nh. Tr??n ?????i c?? lo???i ng?????i nh?? th???. T??c gi??? mu???n l??n ??n trong chi???n tranh v?? trong cu???c s???ng l???m k??? v?? t??ch s???  ch??? gi???i t??ng c??ng, tranh c??ng.
 Nh??ng c??ch vi???t, c??ch b??? c???c truy???n n?? nh?? m???t b??i b??o. V???n ????? c??, b??? c???c truy???n k??m, c??u v??n th?? k???ch, gi???n ????n n??n truy???n th???t b???i.
  V??? ngh??? thu???t, thi ph???p truy???n ng???n c???a L?? V??n Th???o kh??ng c?? g?? m???i, c?? th??? n??i l?? n?? qu??? c?? v?? qu?? nhi???u ch??? v?? l??, v?? l???i. C??ch b??? d???u ngang trong ?????i tho???i ????? thay b???ng d???u ngo???c k??p c??ng ch???ng c?? g?? s??ng t???o m?? ph???i vi???t th??m m???t d???u ngo???c k??p n???a.
  (Lan hi???u ra s??? vi???c, l???nh to??t c??? ng?????i, g??o vang c??? ph??ng???:
???Con t??i ????u r???i? Ai b???t con t??i???? (trang 5, c???t 1, d??ng 19 tr??n xu???ng ??? S??ch ???? d???n) 
N???u vi???t c??ch sau th?? b??? ???????c m???t ngo???c k??p:
  - Con t??i ????u r???i? Ai b???t con t??i?
  L?? V??n Th???o c??n ti???t ki???m c??u l?? g???p c??u n??i c???a nh??n v???t v?? nh??n v???t v??o c??ng m???t c??u:
  ???Em s??? th??m m??? ba, Lan n??i.  (trang 9, c???t 1, d??ng 17 d?????i l??n ??? S??ch ???? d???n)
  ???G???n ????y th??i, Ph????ng ????p.  (trang 9 c???t 2, d??ng 22 tr??n xu???ng ??? S??ch ???? d???n)
 D???u ph???y d??ng ????? ng???t ?? trong c??u v??n ????? ti???p n???i ?? kh??c cho c??u tr???n ngh??a, ch??? kh??ng th??? d??ng ng???t nh??n v???t ??ang n??i m?? l??m th??nh m???t c??u v??n.  Hay b??y gi??? v??n Vi???t c?? c??ch vi???t c??u h???u hi???n ?????i nh?? v???y. T??i kh??ng bi???t n???a. R???t nhi???u v?? r???t nhi???u nh???ng c??u nh?? v???y v?? c??? nh?? c??u kh??ng ch??nh x??c, sai c??? logic, sai c??? t??m l?? nh??n v???t trong truy???n c???a L?? V??n Th???o..
????????m n?????c ??? t???n ????u????,  Lan th???y m??nh bu???t mi???ng h???i.  (trang 9, c???t 2, d??ng 20 tr??n xu???ng ??? S??ch ???? d???n).
 Nh??n v???t Lan th???y ???????c m??nh bu???t mi??ng h???i th?? Lan ????y l?? th???n th??nh r???i. Hay Lan h??a th??n th??nh nh?? v??n L?? V??n Th???o, ?????ng ngo??i quan s??t m???i th???y m??nh bu???t mi???ng t??? h???i m??nh
 V?? l??, v?? l???i h???t c???!
    Ch??m truy???n ng???n c???a L?? V??n Th???o l?? m???t ch??m truy???n ng??n qu?? y???u, s?? s??i, nh???t v?? r???t d???, kh??ng n??n in.
V???y c?? th?? r???ng:
S?? s??i truy???n ng???n Th???o ??ng
V??? qu?? thu?? l???i m???y c??ng ru???ng c??y
Ki???m rau, ki???m ch??o qua ng??y
Vi???t v??n nh?? th??? th?? gay qu?? tr???i!
                                    H?? N???i, ng??y 1 ??? 5 ??? 2014
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